Recently in the United States, there is a controversial debate about whether there should be a policy for employees to work only in four days of the week instead of five. Apparently, both ideas have advantages and disadvantages and the passage support the idea by stating three reasons and the professor suggests that it's not like as the passage states and opposes each point made by the passage.
First, the passage claims that working in a four-day work week will increase company profits because employees would feel more rested and alert, and therefore they would make fewer errors in their work. However, the professor refutes this by mentioning that it would cost more money for the companies as they should provide employees with sufficient training and medical finance supports and also more space and computers should be provided for more employees. Furthermore, financial support for medical issues is the same for both types of employees and therefore, as the number of employees rises, the cost will go up, too.
Second, the passage posits that having the four-day option will reduce unemployment rates in the country. However, the professor refuses this idea and surmises that this will affect current employees in a way that they have to work overtime to elevate in their work and get promotions. Moreover, they will raise employer's expectations and many of them may think that four-day employees are the same as five-day employees and eventually, this will render employees unpleasant.
And as the final point, the article states that working less hour in a week will improve individual employees in a way that they will have more time spending with their family, or pursuing their private interests. The professor rejects this point by saying that this will decrease the stability of employee's jobs and it will have a negative effect on their career. Furthermore, employers will reluctant to promote four-day employees and they prefer five-day employees in the management parts of the company because of the nature of their job.
To sum up, the passage and the professor have controversial notion about the number of days employees should work in a week.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, furthermore, however, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 5.04856512141 376% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 7.30242825607 260% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1373.03311258 133% => OK
No of words: 356.0 270.72406181 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13202247191 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59445203335 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 145.348785872 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47191011236 0.540411800872 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 545.4 419.366225166 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.4484411182 49.2860985944 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.25 110.228320801 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 21.698381199 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06452816374 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.451321725738 0.272083759551 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198938143267 0.0996497079465 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101772653321 0.0662205650399 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282046313206 0.162205337803 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456019935539 0.0443174109184 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.3589403974 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 53.8541721854 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 63.6247240618 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.2008830022 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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