Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The Internet causes people to interact with each other less than they did in the past. Use specific reasons to support your answers.
The use of internet is growing a lot nowadays; people are using the internet for so much things, like to do researches, assignments, to entertain themselves, and even to talk one with another. In my point of view, with this grow, people are interacting each day less, and I and will develop my two main reasons in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, people are interacting less, because each minute, they are more concentrated in their online world, and they forget everything around them. I can talk about myself, when I`m at the supermarket, or when I`m sit at the park, I start to look up for this and, when I see, one hour passed straight, and I feel that was only ten minutes, I didn`t see of someone passed on me side, or even sit, because I was so concentrated that I could notice nothing. As a result of this personal experiences, I think that each day passed we interact less.
Secondly, many people, uses social medias to talk with each other, even when their at the same place. I also had an experience with this reason, sometimes, when I and my family are at a place with many other people, and we want to make some gossip, we text each other to talk our thought about another person, or even talk about something that no one can heard.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...s; people are using the internet for so much things, like to do researches, assignme...
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Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... experience with this reason, sometimes, when I and my family are at a place with...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'hear'
Suggestion: hear
...en talk about something that no one can heard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, second, secondly, so, as to, i feel, i think, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 1977.66487455 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 230.0 407.700716846 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54782608696 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57028239826 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578260869565 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 618.680645161 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.3284554857 48.9658058833 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.428571429 100.406767564 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8571428571 20.6045352989 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8571428571 5.45110844103 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227095434285 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123846425558 0.076458572812 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572086460406 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164071630071 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664833911459 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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