I like to agree have broad knowledge of different academic subjects is better than in one specific subject . Personally having broad knowledge in many subject is better than in specific in one subject .i believe in this way for some reason. In the present many people are jobless in the developing country because they feel heisted and cannot do different kind of works then their own academic failed. Which makes them frosted and they have to economically problems .Today many people want to choose science feilde because the magic of science is unusual in the world.thise is the strong reason for many subjects are in the shadow today but, in my opinion if we have extensive knowledge of malty subjects it is easier for us to live because all subjects are play important role in our life ,family,society, country and in the world for example :management subject teach us How to spent money? and How to save money ?and How can do financially strong our self ?which is the major parts of our daily life .other subjects like Moral , Humanity, culturel subjects are more significant for our happy life . My uncle for example is an engineer but he also qualified in different subject in management which is more important in business to get big achievement. Today he has make good money with brilliant status. I think it is a good example for us .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, for example, i think, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 1977.66487455 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 233.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78111587983 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61122465276 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557939914163 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.095057236 48.9658058833 274% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.25 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.125 20.6045352989 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 34.0 5.5376344086 614% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355250244764 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183038258661 0.076458572812 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.198597789497 0.0737576698707 269% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.355250244764 0.150856017488 235% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 86.8835125448 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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