Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the development of education mechanism, youngsters are able to study more knowledge of different areas. some people contend that it is better to have broad knowledge of these subjects while others believes that specializing in one specific subject is more proper. From my perspective, learning broadly is more essential for our youngsters.
In the contemporary society, we are dealing with complicated and intricate problems every day. Most of them are consist of many knowledge of different subjects. For instances, a video game is the mixture of musics, images, text, computer animation, which needs their maker to get involve all of these subjects simultaneously. If people doesn't know any about others knowledge, then they will hardly to cope with these problems.
Furthermore, learning broadly means that we should build a efficient studying mechanism in order to keep pace with rapid change of academic subjects, which promote us to specialize in distinct subject as well. For instances, my brother, who works for a it company, has participated in a group work of designing application, which require a art skill to perform well. he is proficient at programming language and operational system, but he doesn't familiar with art design or any aesthetic work. so, he chose to borrow some art books from library and went to gallery for appreciating advanced artwork. During his art study, he realize that some theories in aesthetic area could also use in program designing, such as controlling the length of code blocks and splitting into comfortable zones. With the assistance of art knowledge, he has improved the computer skill as well eventually. so, we can acknowledge that studying progress is always the same.
Admittedly, some people think that specializing in a single area can save their energy and times, and also help them to achieve the top in the specific area. this conclusion is basically right. However, we should consider the tiredness when we repeat to study a stationary knowledge without any change. In this case, learning other subjects can promote us to relax ourselves and maintain a good mood with variety of excitements.
In a nutshell, I agree with the statement that people are more comfortable to have broad knowledge of different subjects. Because many problems nowadays needs us to solve it with various of information. Plus, learning progress is same, but the entertainment is different.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Some
...tudy more knowledge of different areas. some people contend that it is better to hav...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'consisted'.
Suggestion: consisted
...te problems every day. Most of them are consist of many knowledge of different subjects...
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Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
... every day. Most of them are consist of many knowledge of different subjects. For in...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun knowledge seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much knowledge', 'a good deal of knowledge'.
Suggestion: much knowledge; a good deal of knowledge
... every day. Most of them are consist of many knowledge of different subjects. For instances, a...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ning broadly means that we should build a efficient studying mechanism in order t...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...or instances, my brother, who works for a it company, has participated in a group...
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Suggestion: a; it
...or instances, my brother, who works for a it company, has participated in a group wo...
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Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...of designing application, which require a art skill to perform well. he is profic...
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...language and operational system, but he doesnt familiar with art design or any aesthet...
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Suggestion: So
... with art design or any aesthetic work. so, he chose to borrow some art books from...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'realizes'.
Suggestion: realizes
...anced artwork. During his art study, he realize that some theories in aesthetic area co...
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Suggestion: So
... the computer skill as well eventually. so, we can acknowledge that studying progr...
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Suggestion: This
...o achieve the top in the specific area. this conclusion is basically right. However,...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'stationary knowledge'.
Suggestion: stationary knowledge
...r the tiredness when we repeat to study a stationary knowledge without any change. In this case, learn...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... broad knowledge of different subjects. Because many problems nowadays needs us to solv...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to progress'
Suggestion: to progress
... various of information. Plus, learning progress is same, but the entertainment is diffe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, well, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2045.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24358974359 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91738199174 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561538461538 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8172353461 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.380952381 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209226272011 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577446060031 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765034959561 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128602374084 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665490208594 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.