Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
No one can cast a shadow of doubt on the importance of the role which knowledge plays in modern society. Due to the wide-ranging aspect of the various information, it is quite clear that ones' capacity to gain knowledge is limited. A controversial question that is raised in this area is whether one should focus on one particular subject or should acquire shallow understanding from various disciplines. Although some may hold the view that being versatile and having diverse information is of significant importance, I believe that considering the current competitive environment, It is better to be a professional in one subject instead of being the jack of all trade and master of none.
First and foremost, it is crystal clear that in today's job market prowess plays an important role. One should gain the necessary skills in the academic environment to achieve a prosperous career. For instance, Linked in, which is the number one app related to the academic profession, insists on the specialty that everyone should acquire.
Another equally important reason for being a master in a particular subject is the competitive atmosphere dominant to the job market. Individuals who broaden their knowledge during academic studying often could not go deep into the matter; as a result, they lag behind the professional rivals who have limited knowledge but they are masters of their work. For example, If you look at the higher education vacancies, which are looking for new candidates, their priority is to be specialists in one subject; for example, a Ph.D. position for classical design with a focus on Roman remains in the Milan.
Last but not least, It is undeniable that information about various subjects is crucial in some works. But a limitation of time for an individual keeps them from being experts in diverse areas. So in the areas that different knowledge required, it is predicted that cooperation of the various professors, could help tackle the problems.
To sum up, I think it is now clear that broad information, which is shallow, could not contribute to tackling the practical issues. Thus, experts who have focused their studies on one subject could resolve the problems effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, so, thus, for example, for instance, i think, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16897506925 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90324003926 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551246537396 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6965240625 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.4 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207034653036 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656101881826 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371290977361 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109449058238 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399316485913 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 10.002688172 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.