Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People are having a hard time reaching a on consensus whether it is productive to gain deep knowledge of several academic subjects or specialize in a particular topic. Some people hold conflicting ideas. The world we are living in is very competitive. As far as I am concerned, I firmly believe that it would be a good decision to achieve different academic subjects. There are several reasons that to support my points of view and I would explore a few of the most important ones here. To begin with, we live in the modern era where every time creates a new branch that means the knowledge we are trying to gain is expanding. So, new job opportunities are opening and it is true that they demand that candidate who has versatile talent. My own experiences are compelling evidence in this case. I come from an agricultural background but I ought to learn distinct programs that are not related to my sector. To be more exact, I learned statistics, R language , python Program, and GIS. It is apparent that it is an essential to get a better job in my field. Consequently, it helps me to correlate other subjects and makes or invents new things
The second point that comes to mind is that it is easy to switch to other topics . Although it is an onerous and burden to us to gain knowledge on many topics at the same time. But, there is ample evidence suggesting that we can build an excellent career. For instance, I have graduated from Soil, water, and environmental science where I choose three distinct programs that I like. All of them offer me a lucrative career and it is only possible when I engage myself in various programs. Based on this point, it is commonly admissible that people who are intelligent never confine themselves to a particular subject.
Finally, given the factors I outlined above, we may reach the conclusion that though staying in specific issue may lead to expert but hard to find a job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hat it is easy to switch to other topics . Although it is an onerous and burden to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, if, may, second, so, for instance, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63049853372 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73473117519 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592375366569 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2349784915 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7222222222 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9444444444 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129894803853 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313404892775 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393107223874 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725275815944 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335928179242 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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