Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today, with advance of technology people have access to lots of data and they can easily learn everything that they are interested in. When it comes to the issue whether it is good to many different subjects or concentrate on a special one, some believe that it is better to broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject. However, others are disagree. I personally concur with the latter idea for the following reasons.
First and foremost, concentration of a special subjects help you to be perfect in that one. But, by try to learn everything you will learn nothing. For example, I remember when I was in high school I really was interested in mathematic and I spend most of my time studying and solving different problems. It helped me to get a profound horizon over this subject. Nevertheless, I had a friend who really liked to learn everything and she spend her time learning different things. After four year she knew nothing and she just knew a little in everything. So, I could become a great professor in university and she just was perfect for a job like a journalist that needs to have a little knowlege in differetn subjects. In my view, being best in one specific subject is better and it gives you better oportunity to become
Second, it will give them opportunities to be more successful and have a better future. All the important and famouse people, such as scientists concentrated in a specific topic. you can barely find someone who was best in more than a subject because it is not easy to spend your time to be best in more than one important subject and as my father always tell me: "when you open a door of a specific subject in thescience you think that it is like an ocean and to be successful you should learn how to swim in that ocean to reach the destination.
Due to the aforementioned reasons, I think that all the individuals should bear in mind that being great in a subject not only does it help them to be perfect in the subjevt that they are really interested in, but also gives them opportunity to have a better career and gain more money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...omes to the issue whether it is good to many different subjects or concentrate on a special on...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...e specific subject. However, others are disagree. I personally concur with the latter id...
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Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
...eally liked to learn everything and she spend her time learning different things. Aft...
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Line 3, column 526, Rule ID: KNEW_NEW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'new'?
Suggestion: new
...four year she knew nothing and she just knew a little in everything. So, I could bec...
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Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...tists concentrated in a specific topic. you can barely find someone who was best in...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'i think', 'such as', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.179176755448 0.229887763892 78% => OK
Verbs: 0.157384987893 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.111380145278 0.0866891130778 128% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0484261501211 0.046263068375 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0992736077482 0.0685040099705 145% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.118644067797 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0121065375303 0.0351676179071 34% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.69826485504 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0484261501211 0.0309702414327 156% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0702179176755 0.0887237588012 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0169491525424 0.0209618222197 81% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0169491525424 0.0139019557991 122% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2126.0 2387.08602151 89% => OK
No of words: 381.0 408.028673835 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58005249344 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.301837270341 0.338922669872 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.223097112861 0.251872472559 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.160104986877 0.174417080927 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.107611548556 0.112833075102 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69826485504 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488188976378 0.524397521467 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.1678119169 59.2087087015 88% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 25.4 20.5533526081 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.2075918783 48.84282405 189% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.733333333 120.699889404 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.5533526081 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.866666666667 0.644075263715 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 47.7097112861 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.01587301587 1.45489161554 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.509509973957 0.300154397459 170% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0876319833001 0.103427244359 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0908504594563 0.0752933317313 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.482037130274 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.224002239903 0.151897553556 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181620792692 0.114077575197 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13381945089 0.0781384742642 171% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.404426054298 0.336927656856 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0538677431564 0.067059652881 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.362624394595 0.210909579961 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111625006588 0.0618886996521 180% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.