It is safe to say the world is ever-changing and it keeps changing every second. With so much is going on around the globe, there is no shortage of opinion on whether to get up-to-date with world news on a regular basis. Although some new-updaters believe it is important to know every event happing on earth since they might have some effects on their life, I am of the opinion that we should keep this task at a moderate level.
There is no doubt that learning about all the events occurring in the world consumes a lot of our valuable time. As there are millions of possibilities taking place on this planet every second, there are thousands of news and articles being published every minute. If we take these numbers into consideration, it's almost impossible to get ourselves updated on the world as a whole. In fact, our brains are not capable of taking such load of new information, and we ourselves are occupied with our daily life too. Therefore, time is better spent on embracing the present and living life, rather than on immersing ourselves in the pool of news and media. If some important events that will affect our life have really happened, we will get to know them one way or another, without the need to spend hours and hours leaning mostly unnecessary pieces of happened possibilities in the life.
In addition, even if we have all the time in the world to learn about all the events that keep showing up on news pages every minute, it is unlikely we will find most of them relevant to our life. The scope of events around the world is simply too large for anyone to connect to or be influenced by every single piece of information. Furthermore, as an individual learning about what is going on in the world, there is a slim likelihood that a single human-being can take actions and change or affect the situation, regardless of how much impacts those events can have on our daily life. In other words, most of the news we are perceiving do not seem to be much of our business and it is arbitrary to persist caring about all of them. If an event is relevant and worth paying attention to, we will face it together as a whole.
In conclusion, unless one wants to become an alive encyclopedia book of world events, it is time-consuming and unimportant to know about all events happening around the world. Meanwhile, ones that make the headlines are most probable to have impacts on our life, thus should be focused on instead of other irrelevant events.
- TPO 17 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
- TPO14 integrated writing Salvage logging 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Television advertising directed towards young children aged two to five should not be allowed Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 80
- TPO31 Integrated writing 70
- TOEFL T P O 08 Integrated Writing Task 52
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 535, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...affect the situation, regardless of how much impacts those events can have on our da...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, really, second, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2037.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59819413093 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58774248949 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489841986456 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.0 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.8434894089 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.3125 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6875 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26873302109 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868578587357 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569658893944 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167559307563 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199234514951 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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