Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is widely accepted that nowadays with the development of societies so many events happenings around the world some people may hold the view that there is no need to be updated with all the events which would not affect their daily life. Some other, nonetheless, take an opposite point and believe that people should know about all the events even if it would not influence their daily life.
There is a controversial question which is raised in this area, what if we do not care about worldwide happenings? Personally, I have penchant toward the latter. In the next two paragraphs I will aptly delve into my reasons and I will cogently substantiate this perspective.
The first aspect to point out is that it most of the people likes to know about different events whole around the world because it would be entertaining for them to follow up the events. They can spend a lot of time to watch the events via television. My mother`s experience is a compelling example of this notion. She is housewife and she was getting bored often, then I asked her to follow up the American Got Talent which was one of the great shows. Now, she is happy that she can spend her spare time on an exciting event.
Another equally noteworthy point in corroborating my stance is that they can compete with other people around the world in higher levels. Each year, so many events for the sports are happening. So, catching up with this event not only it can be a good opportunity for sportsman to meet the best ones in each area but also it can be exciting for athletes to travel to another countries. In fact, this is a win-win game where sportsman can compete to get a better record and people who are watching them would spend their time on their desires.
Finally, yet importantly, another reason why I agree with this statement is the indisputable fact that we must be updated regarding the events happening around the world to have a development country. For example, two months ago, United stated had send two astronomers for the first time to the space to explore about a better place to live other than earth. However, till that time, I even did not consider it to send a person to space. By putting this in mind, the engineers in our country have started to make a space craft to imitate it from them. Had we not been able to follow up the events happening worldwide, we would have not experienced progress in our country.
To recapitulate, based on the aforementioned argues, I can logically draw the conclusion that being update with the events happening worldwide, can benefit them in many ways, from participating in competitions and gaining a lot of things to be entertaining; actually, There exist innumerable reasons and examples which champion my stance and are not mentioned above. If one weighs the merits and demerits of the above statement, one soon realizes that events are happening worldwide for the people and without participating people in direct or indirect ways those totally would be waste of time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put before the verb 'bored'.
Suggestion: often bored
...n. She is housewife and she was getting bored often, then I asked her to follow up the Amer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, nonetheless, regarding, so, then, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2498.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 527.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74003795066 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65644212319 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491461100569 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 791.1 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.2034648451 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.952380952 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0952380952 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.19047619048 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206238242641 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619166603439 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546866399466 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114081589862 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493465288141 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.