Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is impossible to always be completely honest with your friends.
The issue of friendship and the degree of honesty have always been some controversial topics. In this regard, the scholars discuss about how much the people should be honest to their friends and acquintances. Although honesty is the core of friendship and without it people cannot develope an ideal relationship with their friends, absolute honesty and saying all the things that come to mind can deteriorate the friendship.
All people can agree that there are always some ideas and statements about friends that come to the mind, but if they be spoken can ruin the friendship; and it is completely normal, because our mind develpe much more ideas than what we normally say. Some statistics revealed that only less than ten percent of people's ideas are said to other people. Therefore, if all the opinions and ideas that people have in their mind be told to their friends, many of their relationships can be ended immidiately. I remember an occasion that I was thinking very bad of my friend as if he was trying to harm me and I should make a revenge on him. If by any means he was able to realize that what I was thinking of, he would probably be really upset and even outragous about me.
Absolute honesty can destroy privacy between the friends which can cause detrimental effecs on the relationship. If there was no privacy between friends, there would be so many problems and plights because of that. Everybody has its own secret and is not satisfied to reveal any of those secrets. If some day people think they cannot keep their secrets with themselves because of full honesty, they can think of ending the relationships because of those problems.
In conclusion, people cannot be brutally honest with their friends. This level of honesty not only can cause so many problems to the people's friendships but also may end up a life-time friendship. Who may agree to lose a friendship because of being too much honest with his or her friend?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81065088757 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59016360793 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511834319527 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0746641521 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16185066985 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652388671943 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736474815019 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114206293101 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513072717681 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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