Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Human beings are social creatures. this characteristic made them have a tendency to be surrounded by friends and family members. friends are those who make us feel better. They are the ones who laugh with us in the best moments of our life, and who will be there for us when trauma occurs to us. Some people prefer to keep making new friends, others prefer to keep their old friends for their whole lifelong. As far as I am concerned, I am of the former opinion. I will explore why I feel this way in the following essay.
To begin with, people need a different kind of friendships in different stages of their life. people have different demands and requirements as their ages and their positions change. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. Until ten years ago, most of my friends were my high school friends who tended to spend their time holding late-night parties and hanging around with their girlfriends. Later on, when I entered university I was busy studying my assignments, so I found that if I want to be successful as an academic person, I will have to change my friends. As a result, I quit my old friends and found new friends at the university to spend my time in a better way. this made me graduate from the university with A grades. if I had not changed my friends, I would not have been able to achieve this success.
Secondly, finding new friends will broaden our horizons and perspective on life. finding new friends means to benefit from new people's thoughts and experiences which will result in more success and appearing more opportunities in one's life. For instance, as I mentioned in the preceding paragraph, I decided to change my old friends and choose my friends from my college classmates. By doing this, after graduation I could make a partnership with my new friends and establish a marketing firm that now is a very famous and successful business. Without having such educated and smart friends, I was not able to attain all these job successions.
In conclusion, I believe that people need to find new friends in their life because as time elapses our requirements and our requisitions change, and finding new friends make us face more opportunities in our life and careers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74936061381 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73928206839 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50895140665 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3229443005 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4285714286 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.619047619 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257170212872 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796060225636 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761046175145 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178910942449 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521694684501 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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