Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Throughout history, people due to their social nature have been inclined to make different relationships with other people. One of the most significant relationships among people is friendship which plays a critical role in every people’s private and social life. In this regard, there is a hot topic among people is that whether it is more important to keep old friends than it is to make new friends. In my opinion, making new friends is more important than keeping old friends. I will shed light on my reasons in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, making new friends get you an opportunity to experience new things. Indeed, with meeting new people you have the chance to know about new thoughts and new ideas which opens your mind and helps you to mature personally. Take my personal experience as an instance. I met a girl quite by accident in a fitness club two years ago. At first, we spoke about our daily life, then we soon became friends. She worked in an environmental NGO and just because of our friendship I became familiar with the NGO and its interesting ideas about conserving valuable natural sources of our country. Now I am a member of the NGO and I am experiencing one of the things that I always liked to do. Moreover, I meet wonderful people with great personalities who help me to be a better person.
Second, there is a famous sentence that “As you get older, less you find a real friend”. I totally disagree with the sentences because at any age you can find a person who has a lot in common with you. Moreover, as people grow, new responsibilities and major changes such as getting married or being a mother/ father have permanent effects on peoples’ minds and lifestyles. Therefore, it is a good decision that you make new friends who have similar points with them. To exemplify, some of my old friends got married and others immigrated, they were very busy to stay in touch with me, so I was alone. When I studied a master at university, I became friends with two of my classmates. They were very nice and we soon became so close friends. We have been friends since we met at university and they are my best, trusted and close friends that I have ever had.
To sum up, making new friends let you to not only be familiar with new people with new thoughts but also find new people who are better friends to you rather than old ones. You also are given an opportunity to surrounded yourself with great people who inspire you to be a better person. Based on my positive experiences mentioned above, I highly recommend that people do not restrict themselves to old friends and welcome new friendships with open arms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Specific
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2234.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 481.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64449064449 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6527708077 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507276507277 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5768406853 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.36 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.24 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375182683697 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115446685668 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116074376436 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256947534315 0.150856017488 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900145002899 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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