Making and being in relationships is a very basic trait of humans. Man is a social animal, so he requires bond with others to survive in this world. I personally feel that, there can be nothing better than maintaining friendship lifelong. I think this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, it is not very easy to make good friends, as it is a time consuming process. We meet so many new people in our lives on daily basis, but not with everybody ,we become friends. It is not mandatory that we connect with everyone, we have bonding with. For instance, I am an extrovert having a long list of people I share good relation with, but I hardly have five to six devoted friends with whom I spend time and share my life. I believe, only true friends can stand with us in hard times and support us in every way possible. So, keeping those gems is worth it.
Moreover, some bonds are god gifted like, mother, father, siblings etc. While other connections like friendship, are self-chosen. We meet different people at different stages of our lives, some bonds remain forever while some are only for a certain period. People we choose as our good friends can only understand us and we can not expect this from someone we just met a short time ago. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Five years back, when I met with an accident, my childhood friend not only took good care of me but also she was aware of my medical history; Which turned out to be very beneficial for my case in the hospital and helped doctors give me a better treatment.
In conclusion, celebrating an old friendship is more important than making new friends, as friendship is a bond that gets secure with time. As much as bond we share with an old friend, will take a very long time to have that much connection with a new friend.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 66
- TOEFL Writing Task 1 3
- Grades encourage students to work harder at school Do you agree or disagree Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion 88
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement At universities and colleges sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans 91
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 71
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s on daily basis, but not with everybody ,we become friends. It is not mandatory t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50327812759 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570588235294 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9172154177 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163936699863 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539628152165 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524807083166 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115795692828 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785937807546 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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