Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
While there can be differences in opinion among the people in society regarding the choice whether old friends are to be given preference or that one should focus on connecting with new people, i believe that making new friends continuously is very crucial to us humans. To support this i will present a few examples from my own life. First and foremost, no one should stop making new friends just because they are loyal to you today. Instead one must keep building fresh relationships as life progresses as this is not only beneficial for the brain but also that people must remain socially active to maintain and even upgrade their social skills which are the most crucial in anyone's life. I, for instance have shifted my home from one city to another as life progressed and in the process have lost many cherished friends whom i had spent a great deal of time with. But, this doesn't mean that stopped making new acquaintances or forming deep bonds with new people through my journey. In fact, i now have more friends than earlier and thus more connections in this world to whom i can turn to in need. Thus, if i would have just cornered myself and had refused to meet new people there is very low chance that i would have achieved any success in my education and also my life would have been utterly dull. Secondly, active socialising is essential for the mind as it is scientifically proved that spending time with new people has significant impact on the brain and body chemistry in form of the release of certain hormones in the blood stream which promote the well-being of the mind and can even generate happy moods thoroughly kicking away any chances of depression and loneliness. I have personally encountered such situations in which i felt lonesome and gloomy as i had to move away from my home place to a new, alien environment where i knew nobody and no one knew me. But i mustered up some courage and finally made new friends through sports which pulled me out instantly out of the vacuum i was in earlier. These new people that i met even proved useful to me and i learnt about things which i needed the most. Therefore, making new friends is utterly beneficial to an individual not only in terms of mood but also in terms of usefulness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57673267327 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50377007173 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542079207921 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.1485724687 48.9658058833 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.230769231 100.406767564 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0769230769 20.6045352989 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182956044049 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741134830209 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479653591336 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182956044049 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 58.1214874552 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.