Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Friendship is one of the most important relations in our life. it gives an emotional and a physical supports to people, and it adds joys to their life. In considering which is more important, is it to have new friends or to keep the old one's, I think that keeping old relations has to be the main concern of anyone. I feell this way for two reasons, which I am going to explain in the following essay.
To begin with, whenever the relation is older, it will be stronger, and people usually tend to look for stronger relationships, so they will feel more comfort. For instance, I used to have a lot of friends in my life, but my friendship with sara is the oldest. We have been good friends since we were in the fifth grade. we used to play, chat, shop, and even sometimes have a sleepover together. Last year, I moved to another city, that is five hours away. Since then, eventhough I meet many new and good people there, but still I feel that there is something missing in my life. Sara was a crucial part of my day. that is why I am trying to move back to my original city or find a good job opportunity for her, so she coulad come and live with me here.
Second, old friends have many memories with each other, which make them able to share happiness and sadness togather, but this will be impossible with new people. For example, after I moved to the new city, and started my new job there, I struggled a lot with my new mannager because he was very strict in many things, and I could not have an agreement with him about the job schedule. Everyday, after my shift ended, I looked for someone to speak with about what happened with me, but I could not share my feelings with anyone rather than my best friend sara, and I ended up calling her every day, and spent hours talking, crying, and laughing.
To sum up, I strongely believe that keeping old friends are more important than making new ones not only because of the infinite number of memories, but also people need long term relations to feel comfortable and to be at ease.
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...ife. Sara was a crucial part of my day. that is why I am trying to move back to my o...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
...eement with him about the job schedule. Everyday, after my shift ended, I looked for som...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, so, still, then, as to, even so, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33246073298 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34167388494 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53664921466 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 13.0 1.86738351254 696% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7328577939 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.4375 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256050866021 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791047962662 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826102996447 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179941732048 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572923875821 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.13 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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