I believe that old friends are important to keep as they know us for a very long time, we can share anything we want to. We can take any life advice from them because we believe in them. However, old friends are important but meeting new people and making them our friends is also important for many reasons.
Firstly, old friends are your best friends and you can share the deepest and darkest parts of your life with them. Moreover, in many hard times, you can ask them for help and their help. This is because we do believe in them. Whenever I face any difficulty in my life and if I am not able to tackle that, I take help from my old friend. I remember when I graduated, I did not have a job and for that reason I was depressed. I talked about this with him and he gave me a book titled "secrets" which is about the law of attraction. That book helped me to come out of depression and gave me enough motivation to keep hustling for a job. After some days I got the job because of that hard work.
To meet new people and befriend them is also a good thing since it is highly probable that they are from different parts of the country or continent, cultures, and races. Because of this diversity, we can learn their cultural values and we can adopt what is good in their culture but the old friend can also have different cultures and we can learn so much from them. I have a Jain friend, in their culture, they ask for forgiveness at the end of every year by saying "michhami dukkadam" which basically translates to please forgive me if I have hurt you. Even when they have not done anything wrong they say this so that the misunderstanding between people can be removed. Thus, by keeping your old friend you can learn a lot from them.
In contrast, new people at work can help you with your work. I agree that some of my old friends do not share the same academic background as me thus they can not help me in my work related to software development. Indeed, an old friend might not help me in software development but there are some life skills that they can teach us for example, I have a friend who taught me about investing in the stock market which helped me to understand the deep meaning of saving and investing for the future. It also explained to me how it will help in bad economic conditions in life. Thus, we can also learn many skills from old friends.
A myriad of examples discussed above shows that new people are good to have but keeping your old friends is more important.
- Oftentimes the results of a particular action are not of consequence rather it is the way we go about the action that matters most 50
- Professors are normally found in university classrooms offices and libraries doing research and lecturing to their students More and more however they also appear as guests on television news programs giving expert commentary on the latest events in 75
- Oftentimes the results of a particular action are not of consequence rather it is the way we go about the action that matters most 50
- Rembrandt is the most famous of the seventeenth century Dutch painters However there are doubts whether some paintings attributed to Rembrandt were actually painted by him One such painting is known as attributed to Rembrandt because of its style and 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 89.0 43.0788530466 207% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2056.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35593220339 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47575140428 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436440677966 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2019042624 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4545454545 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229527647592 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867295549998 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968017371287 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172845008625 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630282868141 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 58.1214874552 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.