Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Friendship has a vital impact on everyon...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...ip has a vital impact on everyone life. therefore, we have to be very careful when we cho...
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... just because the chose the wrong one. First and foremost, the old friends know...
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Suggestion: For
...our attitude when you are happy or sad. for example, I have friend, who I know sinc...
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Line 2, column 139, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'friended'.
Suggestion: friended
...u are happy or sad. for example, I have friend, who I know since elementary school; sh...
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Line 2, column 345, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'understands'.
Suggestion: understands
...er recently. She so nice, but she never understand me like my old friends. Secondly, i...
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...ver understand me like my old friends. Secondly, its not easy to make a new fri...
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Suggestion: friend
... Secondly, its not easy to make a new friends when you are grownup. Weve been so busy...
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Suggestion: We've
...ake a new friends when you are grownup. Weve been so busy with our life like, workin...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun responsibilities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...gh like the old friend when we are much less responsibilities. By and large, we are ...
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Suggestion: don't
...ng them so fast duo to the fact that we dont spent enough time with them because ol...
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...dont spent enough time with them because old friendship build literally and figur...
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...ely on sharing every moment with them. Due to the aforementioned, I firmly beli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, as well as, by and large

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 52.1666666667 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 257.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44357976654 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42737320646 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571984435798 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9129344578 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1666666667 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198970403507 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773762326883 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615392608041 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120590805052 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235157960711 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 86.8835125448 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

More content wanted.

Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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