Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It s better to spend money enjoying life like going on vacation than to save money for the future

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It's better to spend money enjoying life like going on vacation than to save money for the future.

Submitted by dyx0819 on Tue, 04/11/2017 - 22:39

Money management can be an very important lesson to everyone. Different people hold different opinions about spending their money. Some people argue that we should enjoy our life in time and spend the money at present, while others believe that it is better to save it for future use. I agree with the former one.

First, spending money currently brings good life quality. In such a rapidly growing life, everyone is under a lot of pressure, given from work or family. It is necessary for us to find a way to release our pressure so that we won't suffer from serious physical or mental health problems. Spending money sometimes can give us some indirectly happiness to our life and elevate the life quality. For example, going on vacation enables us to breathe the fresh air and view the beautiful sceneries, keeping us from thinking about the troubles in the reality. Spending much money to buy a beautiful dress enlighten our mood so that we won't feel sad about the difficulties we meet. Everyone just has only one chance to live, so it is pretty meaningless to live a boring and poor life for the purpose of saving money.

Second, spending money presently actually leads to self-improvement and makes more money. I once heard that people who know how to spend money are those who earn big money. It is because they spend money wisely on enhancing themselves, which helps them be more competitive in the job market or have more channels to earn money. For example, by joining a yoga club or buying expensive makeup, people can improve their outer appearance so that they can give people a good first impression or have more chances to be appreciated by their leaders. It will result in job advancement and growing social network. Similarly, After going on the vacation, people can share their travel experience on the website or even publish a book about their trip. People are also able to become a dance coach after dancing for relax for years. Spending money on our hobbies can enrich our experience and boost our overall abilities, resulting in more job choices and several revenue channels.

Admittedly, some people may claim that saving money can encounter with the potential risks in the future. Specifically, once people form a family and raise a child, education can be a large expenditure and they should save money for their children to, for example, have some extracurricular classes. However, if we have a second thought, we will realize that money is not the primary thing children want. They want a happy childhood and an interesting family rather than watching their parents earn money every day. They want their parents to spend money to go on vacation together, which can also broaden children's horizons and let them experience different cultures. They want their parents to accompany them to play sports together, which guarantee their strong body. They want their parents having a lot of unique stories to tell about their spare time, such as going hiking or doing the hand-draft, which is also a good way to foster their interests in certain areas. In this way, children will have a happier life and become an interesting person.

All in all, the reason we earn money is because we need to spend it. Instead of saving money for potential future risks, it is more advisable to spend the money at present.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
Money management can be an very important lesson to everyone. Diff...
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Line 7, column 670, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...let them experience different cultures. They want their parents to accompany them to...
^^^^
Line 7, column 772, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...her, which guarantee their strong body. They want their parents having a lot of uniq...
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Line 9, column 38, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
... All in all, the reason we earn money is because we need to spend it. Instead of saving ...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, however, if, may, second, similarly, so, while, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2767.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 571.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84588441331 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88831323574 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5001078062 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490367775832 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 867.6 618.680645161 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9364196101 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4137931034 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6896551724 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13793103448 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307639002343 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959362154097 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636978802735 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202814333851 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412004126949 0.0645574589148 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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