Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is hard to deny that leadership is an ability that is quite difficult to acquire. And such a fact leads impressionable people to generate the opinion that leadership is an ability that comes naturally and a person cannot learn to be a leader. However, such a statement suffers from both logical and factual fallacies, and it should be examined meticulously. In my opinion, I disagree with this statement for some reasons.
First of all, if leadership is a natural ability, then someone may be a leader from a very young age. But there are a lot of people who did not show any leadership ability when they are in their childhood. For example, the greatest basketball player Michael Jordan. Although he was a very talented basketball player when he came to the NBA firstly, not many people saw him as a leader in the team. But after failed to the same teams in the playoffs many times, he knew that if he want to win a championship, he need to become a leader of his team. So leadership is an ability that can be learned and not come naturally.
Furthermore, if someone was thought to have leadership naturally, this may be because of he did not tell others how difficult the process he becomes a leader. Take the case of another great basketball player Lebron James. Lebron was thought an inborn leader in the field of basketball. However, not many people know how much he paid to become a leader. Without the huge efforts he paid during his high school, it is no way he would make such huge achievements nowadays.
Nevertheless, a voice arises that there are sure some people showed ability from an early age. Ironically, this is not mean that leadership cannot be learned. Some people may not have had this kind of ability when they were a kid, but this is not mean that they would not be a leader when they grew up.
In conclusion, leadership is an ability that can be learned even if it will be a very difficult process. While one sees a circle and another sees a zero, I believe my opponents will compromise after being shown to my article.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 481, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...playoffs many times, he knew that if he want to win a championship, he need to becom...
^^^^
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because he' instead.
Suggestion: because he
... have leadership naturally, this may be because of he did not tell others how difficult the p...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56756756757 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63258227 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475675675676 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5746928504 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186491203984 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668457635364 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626716787424 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115812833871 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578280949581 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 481, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...playoffs many times, he knew that if he want to win a championship, he need to becom...
^^^^
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because he' instead.
Suggestion: because he
... have leadership naturally, this may be because of he did not tell others how difficult the p...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56756756757 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63258227 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475675675676 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5746928504 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186491203984 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668457635364 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626716787424 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115812833871 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578280949581 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.