My grandfather once said,” If I were supposed to go back to my childhood age, I would prefer to die”. Why did you prefer that? I asked him. “Living in that age brought me lots of stresses, and caused I couldn’t enjoy my life for a plenty of reasons”, he said. By the way, after hearing a number of anecdotes and events, I found living at the present time is much easier than ever before.
If you want to travel somewhere away your country, you can do it in very short time by plenty of technological features available at the present time, but at the time of our grandparents’ childhood they had to wait and spend long times for arriving to that place. For example; years ago when the people wanted to go to Mecca for Pilgrimage, they were traveling by camels taking long times- over 1 month. At this age people are doing it in a very shorter time- 1 or 2 days maybe. As long as traveling is part of our life, so the easiness of traveling can be an example of living much more easily than ever before.
The second reason which makes our life easier than the time of our grandparents’ childhood is learning faster and quicker. In that time there were not that much sources and resources for gaining knowledge and skills e.g. there was a scientist in a city 500 – 1000 km away of one’s house, since traveling around the cities and countries was hard that person couldn’t go for learning, but now there are a lot of sources for learning something such as internet which even we can learn through online courses created in different websites, teaching by different schools and in different languages. We live our better when we learn better and more.
There are a lot of ways to travel somewhere in a shorter time and hundreds of chances to get another degree of knowledge. When I look around myself and the world, I can see many opportunities for doing my tools, finding my beloved objects and features, achieving my goals and dreams, I figure out living is easy for me.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
My grandfather once said,' If I were supposed to go back to my ch...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...icker. In that time there were not that much sources and resources for gaining knowl...
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Line 5, column 643, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...uages. We live our better when we learn better and more. There are a lot of ways to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, e.g., if, look, may, second, so, for example, such as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60664819945 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76619117176 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545706371191 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.57717865 48.9658058833 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 118.785714286 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7857142857 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201606049386 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696126066188 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047503220818 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122314075821 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578361685789 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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