Opinions differ as to whether the entrance fee of art galleries and museums should be not charged any cost for visitors. While this free entrance has several significant advantages, the returns are also highly justifiable.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why government should offer a wide opportunity for people visiting a work of art. This great chance leads to vast expanding local cultures through literary and artistic heritage in every generation. As a consequence of easier approach to cultural characteristics, these exhibitions will appeal an enormous of audiences to study and gain knowledge this art school. In addition, local residents who live near these places might increase their income through various trading activities. For instance, people have a favorable opportunity to sell related souvenirs for an extra
outcome to travellers.
On the other hand, there are several drawbacks if people do not pay any fee for art galleries and museums. The first reason is that this free fee brings a heavy financial burden on the government. Because this income is important for ministry maintaining and protecting these valuable cultures, such as rentaling securities, paying repaired fee or updating attract products. Another reason is that government should pay more attention to others fields, which is crucial for developing country gradually. If government must invest more money on this school of art, it will lack of money on investing healthcare or education aspects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
Opinions differ as to whether the entrance fee of art galleries and m...
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Line 3, column 616, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y to sell related souvenirs for an extra outcome to travellers. On the other h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, while, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 234.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4358974359 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86101456467 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649572649573 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.6936465933 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.0 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104062667158 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384040974577 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439795130559 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0480535282762 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443738020615 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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