There are certain considerations or factors that everyone should take into account to investigate and examine advertisements. I certainly agree that most advertisements assist products to look better. Someone can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side. The explanations go as follows.
Firstly, they use modern technology to make products sound better. These days, human experience a huge advancement and improvement in different fields of science and engineering. These technical and practical improvements come to contribute advertiser to produce and offer a fascinating and an intriguing advertisement. They utilize several visual and audio effects to make products sound better in which attract more attention. For instance, candies and other junk foods should appear in different colors and with an elegant music to whet children’s appetites to pay money for them.
Furthermore, emphasizing on advantages of a product is another noticeable reason. Another way that advertisements try to persuade people for shopping is to show the positive profits of a good or merchandise and hide its negative points. This is especially common for medical products. For instance, advertisements talk about the efficiency of diet drugs as a great solution for overweight or maybe for hair growing. But there is no any description and alert about negative consequences of such medical treatments including chronic daily headache, depression, stress, or even hypertension.
Admittedly, there are some justifications by one who argues that advertisements attempt to show the products as they really are to gain customers' trust. All companies and factories compete with each other to acquire more trust, and therefore make more profits. So any exaggeration and betray can harm this trust and destroy a well known business. However, still I affirm that advertisements attend to show products look much better. These overstatements cannot harm a company because most of the adults and children are aware about mentioned advertisers’ techniques. Besides, there are other ways to compensate and increase customers' trust like discounting, free product, or even providing a better service.
Due to aforementioned ground, all folks should bear in mind that advertisements try to show products better. Participation of technology and emphasizing on advantages are two prime and conspicuous supports
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun visual seems to be countable; consider using: 'several visuals'.
Suggestion: several visuals
... intriguing advertisement. They utilize several visual and audio effects to make products soun...
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Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...or maybe for hair growing. But there is no any description and alert about negativ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, really, so, still, therefore, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2042.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67222222222 4.8611393121 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27113734138 2.67179642975 122% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608333333333 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3651846616 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8181818182 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22727272727 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211576408922 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604227292993 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680451344574 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107923296865 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386826219428 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 58.1214874552 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 10.9000537634 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun visual seems to be countable; consider using: 'several visuals'.
Suggestion: several visuals
... intriguing advertisement. They utilize several visual and audio effects to make products soun...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...or maybe for hair growing. But there is no any description and alert about negativ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, really, so, still, therefore, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2042.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67222222222 4.8611393121 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27113734138 2.67179642975 122% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608333333333 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3651846616 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8181818182 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22727272727 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211576408922 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604227292993 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680451344574 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107923296865 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386826219428 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 58.1214874552 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 10.9000537634 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.