Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The way advertising is crucial in international trade. Nowadays, there are many companies competing each other to sell their products throughout world. some people believe that corporation exaggerate to advertise their products than its reality, however others hold oppisite view. In my opinion, level of advertising in products beyond their fact for two noticeable reasons.
The main reason is that firms, making advertisement overseas, increase sale of products. Among various products like goods, comunidity, apparents, and so on, how to make advertising can impact on company's future. In addition, individuals pay more attation to kind of advertising instead of level of products. Therefore, in any way, shape, or form advertisements, firms compete to obtain more customers in order to sell more their products no matter the real quality. For exmaple, polls, surveying relation between kind of advertising and sales, show that people purchase products according to level and number of ads. At first, researchers anticipated customers, who buy something, would choose products pursuant to their reality. Surprisingly, as over time, companies making good advertisement in spite of low level of products could sell, while other firms producing high quality products bankrupted. As you can see, advertisment cause product to appear much better than its fact.
Another reason is that advertising, especially exceeding reality, distinguish a product. In today's business world, the best way abosrbing people is advertise exaggeratedly, although some individuals might don't be tempted. companies exploit of communication equipment including televistion, radio, Internet, and so forth so as to take advantage of audiences. In other words, by these apparents, special product adverising more than its reality maintain in individual's minds. For instance, I had grocery store, containing assorted products in different quality, in Teharn city. powders, belonging a low level company, would never sell and occupy space of my supermarket. After some time has passed, company began to make advertisement in order to persuade customers to buy its products. Amazingly, day by day, people make a purchase powder, not shopping ever before advertising, and I could gain more money. This experience taught me, quality products have less influence on appearance than advirtisments.
In conclusion, make advertising cause products to appear better than its facts that lead to increase sale of products, and distinguish a product. companies should pay more to advertisement if they want to progress faster.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2214.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70618556701 4.8611393121 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06000673114 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59793814433 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0087078007 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.2608695652 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8695652174 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17391304348 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188680581241 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627657359935 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495221315574 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138423643486 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392025750176 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 10.9000537634 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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