Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
The debates on whether the products seem higher quality in the advertisements than in reality or not have garnered a range of views. Nowadays, many are adamant that a myriad of elements should <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-672A767E3BD9A98C4F8D5508F5606604" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be taken" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">be</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-672A767E3BD9A98C4F8D5508F5606604" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be taken" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> taken</pwa> into consideration to check the constructive and destructive facets of this issue. Some people posit that a plethora of false claims made in promoting products. <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-669F538861E35383E21E4656A55B14C8" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_377" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: Some" data-pwa-suggestions="Some" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="On the other hand, some" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">On the other hand, some</pwa> others take the opposite side and disagree. From my vantage point, I agree with the former group and aver that many companies are presenting their goods in a way far from reality. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
The first exquisite point to <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-42B5F41F35E1C803B6C947C48B6AA440" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be considered" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">be</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-42B5F41F35E1C803B6C947C48B6AA440" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be considered" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> considered</pwa> is that the increase in sales rate. In a narrow condition, advertising plays a crucial role in the company's marketing plans. Therefore, a myriad of companies may advertise their goods in an excellent method, regardless they show the correct picture and property of their products. However, their goal is to increase the demand in any method. A vivid example that can shed light on this subject is one from my sister's experience. She is working in an advertising company, their work is showing and promoting various kinds of goods in the best way. However, my sister has saw many situations and cases that the advertisement was far away from the real picture because the manufacturing company wants to increase the demand for this good. In brief, advertising is a pivotal tool in marketing strategy that can increase or decrease the demand for a specific product.
Second, another reason which deserves some words to say is that many countries do not have any regulations to control the advertising issue. Many unfavorable impacts could be a result from the absence of laws and regulations, such as companies may show their products in a way opposing the real picture of them. For instance, in my country, there are no laws to regulate the advertisements. The government in my country does not check the advertising activities. And a result is a myriad of advertisements that show on television or radio seem better and higher quality than they are.
To wrap it up, in the light of <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-D069A9B717E442C79B138E56AA287DD9" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_3107" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: above" data-pwa-suggestions="above" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="above-mentioned" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done pwa-mark-ignored">above-mentioned</pwa> reasons, I strongly believe that advertisements today do not show the real and true picture of the products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1451, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'sawed', 'sawn', 'seen'.
Suggestion: sawed; sawn; seen
...in the best way. However, my sister has saw many situations and cases that the adve...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and true picture of the products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, in brief, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4275.0 1977.66487455 216% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 515.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 8.30097087379 4.8611393121 171% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 10.5114072486 2.67179642975 393% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464077669903 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1212.3 618.680645161 196% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.4 1.51630824373 158% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 136.930937327 48.9658058833 280% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.125 100.406767564 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4583333333 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0379066125546 0.236089414692 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373171743444 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463047147818 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0515433251171 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516206656533 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.4 11.7677419355 241% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -17.52 58.1214874552 -30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.9 10.1575268817 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 30.86 10.9000537634 283% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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