Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Multiple aspects combined together makes a job sating for a person. Although, money is one of the aspects, it solely isn’t enough for someone to be happy with his job. Therefore, I disagree with the given claim that the most important aspect of a job is money which a person earns. There are myriad reasons as to why I am supporting my position. Some of them are listed below.
First and foremost, without job satisfaction, a person can’t be content just by earning a huge ton of money. For an example, say, I enjoy photographing animals, which I am very good at, now, instead of pursuing my skills, if I start working in an IT company which doesn’t interest me at all, even though, the money which is paid is prodigious, I will never be complacent, leading to inefficient work.
In addition to job satisfaction, respect, freedom and growth are equally important in a job. Absence of either of these can make job mundane. For an instance, one of my friend, Rani, used to work in a big MNC which treated her like shit and lambasted for even minor mistakes. She didn’t have freedom to try out anything new, but, to keep doing the same old stuff. In spite of the big money which was paid, she was extremely dissatisfied with her job. In summary, money can’t excuse these factors which are equally important for a job.
Last but not the least, work-life balance is irrefutable aspect of a job that everyone seeks to have. One’s happiness index is dependent on the work life balance he enjoys. So, I had a cousin, Sunil, who used to have frequent fights with his spouse because of his tight schedule and unending work that used to get stretched to home. Time is an inevitable factor for nurturing a relationship. If a person is unable to spend quality time with his family because of the work, then that work isn’t very good. On the other hand, my dad, being a professor, used to come back home early and relax, instead of continuing his work at home. Even with the less pay, he was very happy as he could spend his time post work with his family.
In all, although, some people might argue that money, itself, can make a person happy and is the most important aspect of a job, I reckon without job satisfaction, respect & freedom and a healthy work-life balance, money doesn’t stand high. There must be a balance of all in a job.
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
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Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, therefore, as to, i reckon, in addition, in summary, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63744075829 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63041434663 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526066350711 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6529212776 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9545454545 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95454545455 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225182163895 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779186653089 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802661269206 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151410055678 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908009602815 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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