Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
what are the most important aspects of a job you have to consider? to clarify this you need to know about the pros and cons of that work you want to do. In these days there is debate about the importance of the money that an individual can earn by his/her job. Personally, I do not agree with the statement above. I have my own idea and reasons about this matter, which is explored in the following essay.
first of all, many of the people work on a job that they don't like it, they have to done that to make money, on the other hand, some people prefer to do the things that makes them feel happy and have fun by their job. To be realistic, money helps us in the time of issues, such as getting cancer! however, you can enjoy whole of your life by donig somthing you like it most, maybe you feel less stress by that job. my personal experience is a compelling example of this, while I was working as a mechanic, all the time I was thinking about being an actor! but I taught, to start acting, I must have cash! unfortunately, I didn't have anytime! Hence, I changed my mind and began to acting without getting any education in classes! I feel better now! albeit my pockets are all empty.
Secondly, when you have a job which is not paid enough, what are the options for you? to resign and search for another one?! in fact, the people who wants to feel success before retirement choose a business in which they could improve themselves, for instance by inventing novel materials. If I wanted to speak about my life, at first, when I started acting, it wasn't easy because I didn't know anything about the subject! but it made me feel great by improving myself, learning and studying about my favorite job.
In conclusion, I am the opinion that money is not always the most important part of a business. this is because of the sense that it give to the person who do that and also because of the feeling of improve that a job most have.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32054794521 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28802392491 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53698630137 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.3018309702 48.9658058833 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.307692308 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0769230769 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1538461538 5.45110844103 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237315151729 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106171259465 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717688789666 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160263232365 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875164055204 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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