With the development of the whole society, I quite agree with the statement that the most important existing problems affecting our society can be solved within our lifetime.
To begin with, I have to admit that nowadays there exist many urgent issues worldwide, which have a negative impact on nearly every person regardless of their nation and race. In that case, many people are permissive about the current society even its future, regarding those problems unsolvable forever.
Understandable as they may seem, in my point of view, it lacks a deep understanding of how the whole society works. Since severe problems can occur anytime and anywhere, overcoming them is the reason why the whole society as well as our mankind has existed for so long.
Take the environmental problem as an example, nowadays most countries have been working together on this issue and have made surprising progress. Firstly, in order to reduce the emission of carbon dioxide and toxic gases, many kinds of clean renewable energy such as electricity generated by wind and water power have been invented and dramatically developed through several decades. The point is that they can be alternatives of coal and petroleum, thus reducing air pollution as well as global warming to a large extent. Countless scientists and researchers are still making every effort to further improve the environment with new technologies. Moreover, with the increasing importance the public has attached to the environment, a great deal of people begin to change their lifestyles into more environmental-friendly ones, including reducing driving cars and eating meat. With everyone's efforts worldwide, I firmly believe that this problem will be solved completely in the near future.
Similarly, there are many other important problems that have been improved dramatically. For example, gender discrimination is now declining thanks to the prevalence of advanced values, including freedom and equality. Women now have equal opportunities to receive education compared to males, and people's gender has no longer a factor which can significantly affect their promotion in career. Besides, the criminal ratio is decreasing because of the gradually improved legal system and education system.
To sum up, nothing is impossible if we work together. So I firmly believe the problems affecting us right now will finally be solved within our lifetime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 237, Rule ID: MANY_KINDS_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cleans'?
Suggestion: cleans
... dioxide and toxic gases, many kinds of clean renewable energy such as electricity ge...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, still, thus, well, for example, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2045.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42440318302 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94038261063 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610079575597 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7528337845 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.294117647 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1764705882 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.17647058824 5.45110844103 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260226778714 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808683416946 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126848728209 0.0737576698707 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168705196903 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168022451385 0.0645574589148 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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