When I step into the career, I prefer a company which can provide a job with challenging and interesting project, even though I would have less vacation days.
Firstly, I understand that some people may question my choice, since they believe that being occupied with overwhelming work can be so tiring that people cannot enjoy their life. For example, my parents always suggest me to pick an easier job since they worry about my physical and mental health. Reasonable as the above reason may seem, in my opinion, it is short-sighted and lacks the understanding of the value of employment.
For one thing, a job with more challenges is more rewarding. Firstly, I will be paid higher. This no deny that employees' incomes depend on their contributions to companies' profits. More challenging projects mean more profits in return, so those who are responsible for tough work can receive a higher paycheck. Secondly, I can acquire a wide range of knowledge as well as valuable skills. My personal experience is an appealing example of this. I used to work as a data analyst in an Internet company as an intern last summer. The job required a great number of efforts, facing with hundreds of tables concerning various data; every distraction can cause a disaster. Every day I need to fully focus on the work and my brain should function quickly all the time. Although tiring and exhausting, I never regret since I have gained an advanced ability of data analysis and acquired many using skills like programming. Besides, I got an amazing salary which allowed me to travel abroad after the internship. Therefore, I firmly believe that hard work is worthwhile.
For another, tough jobs benefit us from fulfilling our personal values. I firmly believe that the truth of living a meaningful live is to challenge ourselves to get out of our comfort zones. I cannot image how bored I would be when I have to do simple but repetitive tasks every day. However, by doing tough jobs make a huge sense of contribution as well as self-confidence. I can take doctors as a perfect example. It is known that doctors are demanding as well as tiring without too many vacations. They are supposed to be responsible to every patient and fight with horrible diseases. Meanwhile, they are the most honored people since they make every effort to save lives. As a result, they have a tendency to be more satisfied of their life with a sense of achievement.
To sum up, I am of position to choose demanding job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 39, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to demand'.
Suggestion: to demand
... To sum up, I am of position to choose demanding job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, as a result, as well as, for one thing, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81118881119 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77142747591 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571095571096 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2932052258 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3846153846 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57692307692 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270446804574 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618229937801 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08381696494 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159665779013 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110497579654 0.0645574589148 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.