Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important problem affecting society can be solved in your lifetime.
Today's modern society places a great of deal of importance on solving its citizen and occupants
problems. With this in mind, environmental experts and ordinary persons often debate whether this
problems are going to be solved in their life time or not. In my opinion, I believe that problems we are
facing today are too large to be solved in near future for several reasons, two of which I shall touch upon
in the following paragparphs to substantiate my perspective.
To begin with, diseases especially widespread illnesses are hard to overcome. Nowadays, we are facing
with different kind of severe illnesses and despite the advancement in various aspect of medical science,
we are not able to control and overcome this pandemic. The reason behind this is the fact that
microorganism responsible for those illnesses tend to have fast growth and reproduction rate. This help
them to bulid resistance to all solutions and cures already have been proposed. For example, take owr
mutual experience of Covid-19 as an example. Studies have shown that human race were subjected to
the primitive version of this desease and managed to survive that, but nowdays we are a step back from
a society collapse, even though medical practices have been improved so far. Therefore, overcomming
widespread illnesses are beyond the ken of this generation.
Another points worth mentioning is global warming in our plant earth caused mass extinctions of animals
and keep causing this until some plan be devised. In this day and age of depletion of resources in earth,
human have engaged in consuming energy as much as they can to keep factories and industries
running, causing incresing emission of carbon dioxide and other green house gasses. The cumulation of
these gases in earth atmosphere intensifies the green house effect, creating a warmer climate. In this
warm environment, some plants can not survive and since they are at bottom of food chain, some
animals are left with no food to survie. This selfish behavior of humans led us to hardly inevitable
catasrphe for enviroment which is, if not impossible, sometime extremly hard to compenste.
To conclude, having considered all points discussed previously, I firmly believe that human's problem are
highly unlikely to be solved in near future. This is because some diseases are beyond our ken, and also,
human self-centered behavior keeps us away to reaching this goal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
...to overcome. Nowadays, we are facing with different kind of severe illnesses and ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...ussed previously, I firmly believe that humans problem are highly unlikely to be solv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for example, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2068.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24873096447 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72657829039 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611675126904 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3820696397 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.647058824 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1764705882 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70588235294 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.53405017921 551% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11615417136 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374512103143 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434104228954 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0315373844294 0.150856017488 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383945656374 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.