Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most serious problems in the world will be solved during my lifetime. Use details and examples to support your answer.
It is critical important for people to solve the problem in the world all together in their lifetime. Some people might believe that they could eyewitness the serious problem in the world to be solved. However, in my opinion, I claim that the most serious problems in the world will spend more than people’s lifetime. There are two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, nowadays, one of the most significant problem in the world is global warming. Every countries and citizens should take the responsibility to address this issue. But the process will be continued for a long time. The environment needs several decades to recover. For example, there should be a standard which is certified by every country in the world. This standard limit the carbon dioxide emission and other gases which are harmful to our Earth. Not only need an agreement to restrict the countries, but also the government should teach public about the accurate concepts to slow down the global warming. This process will take over lots of generations. People should keep making efforts to cope with this arduous and serious problem.
Moreover, the problems in the world are not simple at all. The government should hire the researchers and experts to elaborate the main reasons that cause these problems. Take the extinction of the animals as an example, government always wants to rescue the animals that are at the edge of extinction eagerly. At first, government should gain the budget to hire the researchers and experts to figure out the methods to recover these species. After conjure up the ways, the construction of the habitats will begin. This construction isn’t easy, because there are lots of obstacles should be conquered. At last, the researchers should keep tracking on these species condition. Every process take time to complete, government should earn enough money to start the project, experts need time to figure out the solutions and construct the appropriate environment for animals. When we consider all processes, I believe it is impossible to deal this problem in ten decades.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the serious problems in the world will not be solved during in my lifetime. Because the process of dealing these problems will be at a slow rate and it is not simple to cope with.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I will explore in the following essay. Nowadays, one of the most significant pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00777202073 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61443635553 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474093264249 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.299094063 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5416666667 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203696581081 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683420779492 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788731400328 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172857661728 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102742891575 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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