Nowadays, with the technology spreading and the world developing , young people can watch movies and television anywhere and at any place as there are televisions everywhere. In this essay, I will provide reasons and explanations why I agree that movies and televisions have more negative effects that positive ones.
It became so easy for young people to be forgers and change their age on their ID or to simply pay a bribe in order to watch 18+ movies in the cinema. These movies were made for a specific age for a reason. They display inappropriate scenes and language that is not suitable for their age. Many of my friends use this language and they think that it is approvable of. These young people may not even understand the meaning of these words and use it ridiculously. They can offend elderly people and their parents without knowing what they have done. These words contribute hugely on the person's manners and their life in the future.
Moreover , most of the movies' stories are unrealistic and the young people take them seriously as if they are real. A lot of movies involve crimes, lying and habits that a parent would never want to teach to their son. These scenes are taken from the movies and applied in their real life causing them a lot of problems. My 7 years old cousin once watched an 18+ movie about a criminal to the extend that at the end of the movie, he said he wants to be a criminal too. A bad influence like this criminal could play a huge role in children lives and ruin them.
Some movies do spread positive effects and are suitable for the young people but they do not out weigh the negative effect. Anyways , parents should be totally aware what their children are watching and guide them to the right path in order to have good manners.
All in all, I totally agree that movies have more negative effects than positive ones as young people become forgers and pay bribes to watch inappropriate movies that affect the way they behave and to take the unrealistic and criminal crimes seriously resulting in ruining their future.
- Print Media, including magazines and newspapers, will soon be completely replaced by internet use sources.To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 63
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, if, may, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67671232877 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37323801668 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509589041096 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6931323369 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.411764706 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.45110844103 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27247548526 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896554476231 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100850599237 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189534753298 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0960719183992 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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