Television and movies are the biggest boons that technology has given to the world. Although it may occur to some people, especially parents of young children, that these developments negatively affect their kids, there are a lot of advantages that parents may not have considered. I definitely do not agree that movies and television impact young people's behaviour more negatively than they do positively.I believe this way for three reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, movies are a great way to impart education to students. Movies based on different themes provide students with different kinds of information. The movies based on history, for example, may motivate students and make them interested to know about the ancient times as there are visuals that depict the scenarios. When watching the historical events in the form of visuals, the students are likely to remember them for a much longer time than if they read about them in the books. Also, reading about history in textbooks could be boring for some students, which may lead to such students being disinterested.
Secondly, televisions these days air various shows related to science and technology which showcase stuff like experiments, new advancements etc. The audience for such shows particularly include kids from grades 3-6. These children are in their learning stage and when they watch new experiments on the TV, they tend to become curious and as a result, end up learning a great deal about science. Students get to know about the idea behind these experiments, the effects that they exhibit and the advancements that they can lead to.
Finally, movies and television help young people to release their stress and to take a break from their otherwise monotonous routine. If the people get to watch some of their favourite TV shows and songs, they may feel happy and as a result they are more likely to be focussed on the work they do. For example, I got really frustated when I had to work on my class project for more than 6 hours continuously. It became really difficult to concentrate as I was tired and my mind was stressed out. I resorted to TV and watched one of my favourite music shows. When I returned to working on my project, I was able to concentrate much better and as a result, was able to finish my project work efficiently.
To sum up, there are ample advantages of television and movies that outweigh their negative effects. If these technological resources are used in the right way and for the right purpose, they can help humans to develop incredibly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, for example, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2155.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9200913242 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69832589899 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504566210046 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4007959831 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171069317901 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534939433199 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671792823344 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1043235576 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811188829128 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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