Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
“Movies and television strongly influence the way people behave?” Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
Every person has his own thoughts that influence his life and the way he behaves. Movies and television are a big part of our daily activity with which we spent time. I agree with this statement because in movies we can see a different style of behaving and living that influence us like a person and it is a important platform for humanity where we interact and change with new ideas. I feel this way for two reasons that I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, humans are sociable organism and it is normal to analyze others behave for using in life. Movies and television express different ideas ,information and situation that help us to understand what we do correct or incorrect. For example, two years ago I didn't have friends because I was very unfriendly and didn't speak with nobody, but in one day I watched a film that changed my vision about friends completely. I saw what impact and what emotions have friends on person's life.I understood that my behavior is incorrect and with time I tried to be more kind and more friendly. Before 2 months I made my first friend and I was very happy. As a result I understand that is important to analyze different movies and to improve your life.
Secondly, scientists prove that movies and television occupy 65% of our life. This medias have a important impact because everyone can use them everywhere.On television we can watch news,shows,movies and each of them conveys different information that change us. For instance,one year ago I started to wathced the news and only in two days I saw so many eveniments that happend in the hole world. I was shocked to find about this news.As a result I understand that television and movies are the better way to find new knowledge about the world ehere we live.
In conclusion I am of the opinion that movies and television influence the way we behave .This is because they are everywhere in our world and they expres new ideas for our brain that change completely our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, as for, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66857142857 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66193730281 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502857142857 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9544244721 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.933333333 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174858656746 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641879332327 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391888318595 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11537900326 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04762422477 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.