Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In my country, young people have a better life today than their parents enjoyed when they were young. Use reasons and examples to support your answer
Do young people nowadays live better lives than their parents did before? In my estimation, I assert that young people definitely have a better life than their parents because not only is there more convenience in today’s life but also people have much better educational opportunities these days.
To begin with, a large number of facilities like internet are accessible to young generation now which result in a more convenient life. Inventions like internet made lives much easier. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When my mother was university student and was working on her thesis, she had to use references which were only available at university libraries. So she had to go to the university library every day and take notes of the parts she required for writing her thesis. However, when I was working on writing my thesis, I could use textbooks uploaded on the website of university library which were reachable from any other place.
Moreover, higher education is available for almost everyone now. The more availability of studying positions at universities, the more prospect of studying in our favorite field. For example, when my mother wanted to go to university, there were limited medical universities. Although she loved to study medicine, she could not have been accepted in the limited number of medical universities by that time. Therefore she chose another field that was not satisfying for her at all.
As I have illustrated, I postulate that we enjoy life much more than our parents did before. Both the facilities such as internet we have today and the possibility of studying higher education in our field of interest are the two main reasons contribute to experiencing better life by new generations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many; numerous
...unities these days. To begin with, a large number of facilities like internet are accessible...
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Suggestion:
... were reachable from any other place. Moreover, higher education is available ...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...r of medical universities by that time. Therefore she chose another field that was not sa...
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... Therefore she chose another field that was not satisfying for her at all. As I have illustra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 288.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14236111111 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86175154644 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1189238398 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7333333333 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263311770653 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837716621965 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888415390348 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169476879399 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117357661108 0.0645574589148 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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