Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In my country, young people have a better life today than their parents enjoyed when they were young. Use reasons and examples to support your answer

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...rching a better opportunities for living . Now everything has been changed . We tr...
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...living . Now everything has been changed . We travel a lot easier with faster cars...
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...example, I want to study abroad and this is also possible as part as free movemen...
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...s also possible as part as free movement of people. Therefore, you become a citi...
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... as free movement of people. Therefore, you become a citizen of the world very e...
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... youth can entertain themselves with so many different sources .They can go go to a concert o...
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...hemselves with so many different sources .They can go go to a concert of their ...
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...ith so many different sources .They can go go to a concert of their favourite wes...
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...h so many different sources .They can go go to a concert of their favourite w...
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...s .They can go go to a concert of their favourite west rock group , watching t...
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...go go to a concert of their favourite west rock group , watching the newest Ho...
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...t of their favourite west rock group , watching the newest Hollywood movies on...
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...ching the newest Hollywood movies on the tablet, learn Chinesse or internationa...
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...t Hollywood movies on the tablet, learn Chinesse or international cooking from ...
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...d movies on the tablet, learn Chinesse or international cooking from videos on ...
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...international cooking from videos on the internet our just stay home while we ins...
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...l these different types of entertainment because of the development of the new t...
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...ntertainment because of the development of the new technologies .They had only c...
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...the development of the new technologies .They had only cafes or if they want to...
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...e development of the new technologies .They had only cafes or if they want to kno...
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...he new technologies .They had only cafes or if they want to know more ,they neede...
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...nly cafes or if they want to know more ,they needed to spend a whole day in the...
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... want to know more ,they needed to spend a whole day in the library in order to f...
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...on they need. Thus, for us today it life is a lot easier than before. In th...
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...e above mentioned reasons I believe that the life in our country is better .Nowad...
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... that the life in our country is better .Nowadays, we travel more often and we c...
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...hat the life in our country is better .Nowadays, we travel more often and we could hav...
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...r country is better .Nowadays, we travel more often and we could have excellent t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72256097561 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60781721379 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.220502916 48.9658058833 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 129.083333333 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 5.45110844103 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.5376344086 650% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174223023356 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621563270716 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391566963941 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10177213378 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218305416729 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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