Which is your favourite room in your house

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... I prefer to spend most of the time when I am in home to be in the living room ....
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Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...pend most of the time when I am in home to be in the living room .This is the pl...
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Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
... I am in home to be in the living room .This is the place where my family gathe...
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Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: This
...I am in home to be in the living room .This is the place where my family gathers, ...
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Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...be in the living room .This is the place where my family gathers, eats and relax ...
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Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... where my family gathers, eats and relax . Firstly, I love family dinners watching...
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Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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..., we normally change a few living spaces .We have been around the world – for plea...
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...we normally change a few living spaces .We have been around the world – for pleasu...
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Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... been around the world – for pleasure or searching better life ,but wherever we a...
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...– for pleasure or searching better life ,but wherever we are we always seek for ...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...tter life ,but wherever we are we always seek for this feeling which make us feel...
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Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...derstood and connected, where the dinner is ready and made with love from your mo...
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Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...m is also the entertainment shared space .Where you can watch movies, just talk fo...
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Where
...is also the entertainment shared space .Where you can watch movies, just talk for wha...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... whatever you want, play games with your relatives, surffing on internet .Where ...
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Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...u want, play games with your relatives, surffing on internet .Where you can stay...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...h your relatives, surffing on internet .Where you can stay alone after long day ...
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Suggestion: Where
...your relatives, surffing on internet .Where you can stay alone after long day at wo...
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Suggestion: Where
...y at work and enjoying your own company.Where you can celebrate special occasions wit...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
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...y at work and enjoying your own company.Where you can celebrate special occasions wit...
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Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...you can celebrate special occasions with your friends and this place will be fill...
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Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...us, this is significant place in my life .The center of my family universe. Living...
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Suggestion: The
..., this is significant place in my life .The center of my family universe. Living ro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, thus, to begin with, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 256.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4921875 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15626702931 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59765625 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.388754597 48.9658058833 305% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 143.75 100.406767564 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.6045352989 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143858628311 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597066366003 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569638408995 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810261099959 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578207508631 0.0645574589148 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

More content wanted.

Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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