Health is more important than anything. Thats why people say "Health is Wealth". In olden days people used to be very healthy but now it is not that easy to maintain good health.I completely disagree with the statement. In my perspective, it is far better to maintain good health in the past when compared to the present. Several reasons can be stated.
Firstly, the quality of food that is available previously is not available today. In earlier days farmers performed cultivation without adding external agents like pesticides, insecticides and obviously that will lead to a high qualit...
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Sentence: Therefore maintainence of one's health is much easy with that living.
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para 3: reason 2
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