When two persons first meet, they try to figure out how to deal with each other, so being a detective, they looking for some signs to put the new person in a category which is familiar for them. It means that they have some stereo types and use them whenever there is not enough information. Since, there is little available data, people tend to make a swift judgment based on what they see externally and what is apparent already. As far as I am concerned, nobody can have a fair judgment only by using external appearance. There are prominent reasons to back up my points, which will be presented i...
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