Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
We are in the 21st century which is famed as the era of information. So, innumerable news exist in the world and every person should at least be aware of the local news of his country. There are some argues about whether we should receive information from every source of information. I partly disagree with this subject and in the following I will check different views on this matter.
Firstly, as I mentioned earlier, there are countable news in the world and as a consequences if we restrict ourselves to the certain resources we may lose some information. To elaborate, every resource may cover only a few categories. For example, one may work on political or sport category. Therefore, if we want to be cognizant of every detail we should follow different resources.
Secondly, if we recieve information from limited source of information we may deprive ourselves of different points of view. Every resource announce the information based on its viewpoint. In order to reach a world-view in every catrgory, it is better to hear or read the news on every stand of view. To clarify, assume one resource mentions the disadvantages of putting egg in your daily meal. However, another resource remarks the beneficiary of consuming egg daily. As a result, if we cramp ourselves to the former resource, our information is faulty.
On the other hand, in the hustle and bustle of our lives we have a limit amount of time for getting information. So, we cannot read or listen to the all of resources. In order to make it clear, presume you have a wife or husband and some children. You should put some time aside for spending time with them. On the other hand, you spend about 8 hours a day for your work. As a result, your time is limited and also so precious. So, you should manage it carefully.
Secondly, some resources are not reliable. Nowadays, a party in the country or in the bigger scale a country is powerful which has the influential media. So, one may alter the news on their benefit. Consequently, we cannot trust every resources.
All in all, by getting information from different resources, we would be aware of every detail in the world and also we become familiar with different aspect of view. On the other hand we have limited time and we cannot trust every resourse. So, in my opinion we should find the best reliable resources and receive the information from them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a consequence' or simply 'consequences'?
Suggestion: a consequence; consequences
... are countable news in the world and as a consequences if we restrict ourselves to the certain...
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Line 9, column 141, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'announces'.
Suggestion: announces
...ifferent points of view. Every resource announce the information based on its viewpoint....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, at least, for example, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79086538462 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72633777589 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454326923077 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 640.8 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9942034375 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1785714286 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53571428571 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163074271884 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472523249512 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04231506921 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951076010705 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363789102519 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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