During the history of mankind, money has been played an undeniable role in society and families, also a lot of progress is closely related to financial potential. In order to reach to any of these goals, people have to learn how to manage their financial aids even at young age, in Contrast, some think that children should not think about money and what is related to it until they become adults. Although both ideas are respectful, from my own perspective, I highly support the first idea and in the next paragraphs, I will delve into the main reasons.
One of the most significant reasons is when a child starts to administer his money from young age, he can make a lot of mistakes, such as spending all the money on unnecessary things, losing money and etc. But because he has a little money, his mistake can be negligible and he will learn a lot of lessons from his mistakes. Also doing such mistakes in childhood help children to prevent doing huge and uncomparable mistakes in future.
The other reason which deserves some words here is that when people from childhood begin to be responsible for their own finance, they can learn a lot of things directly and indirectly. For example, they receive an amount of money on the first of each month and in order to spend it all month, it is necessary to write a schedule, so they will learn how to make a short time plan for their life.
Although all aforementioned reasons are those which one maybe understand at first glance, still there is one reason. Studies showed that the sooner children start to become responsible for their finance, the better they will act in future life.
To make a long story short, if one merits the advantages and disadvantages of starting being responsible for money during less age, he soon will realize that it's inevitable to start it as soon as possible. Any way considering this issue is necessary that parents have to play an important role during all this process and they are responsible to help their childern indirectly and give them advice for how to spend money.
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Suggestion: Also,
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Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, still, for example, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71349862259 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53550103355 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517906336088 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.4712320937 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.583333333 100.406767564 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.25 20.6045352989 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24083623797 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880371383757 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675686015574 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1313211637 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521222673391 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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