Thorough the history traveling has been played a significant role in mankind's life. Nowadays because of a lot of continuous progress in different parts of technology, there are several ways for people to take a trip to near and far destinations. Some people believe that it is more profitable if anybody only travels in his own country, hence others are against this idea. Although both ideas are respectful, from my own perspective, I highly support the first idea and in the next paragraphs, I will delve into the most main reasons.
One of the most important reason is that traveling in our country will cost less. When a family decides to travel abroad, they have to pay a lot of money to get a visa, buy airplane tickets and also booking a hotel. So there will stay fewer funds to spend it during travel. But when they stay in their country, it is possible to travel even own personal car and also instead of paying for hotel they can go to their relative's houses.
The other reason which deserves some words here is that by traveling to a foreign country, one maybe sees a lot of difficulties. From the first moment in which he/she entered a new country, the first possible problem can be a language barrier. Cities which always tourists go to visit are most of the time so big, therefore the other problem can be difficulties to find their roots on the map to their hotel.
Although the aforementioned reasons are those which ones maybe understand at first glance, still there is one reason. While people of a country travel in their own country, they will help their economies to get better directly and even indirectly. Tourists usually pay a lot of money on food, souvenirs and traveling in the city. If they spend this part of the money in their own country, the less money will be going out of the country.
To make a long story short, if ones merit advantages and disadvantages of traveling abroad and in his country, soon he will realize that it's more comfortable and easier to travel in hometown. Considering this point in necessary that in order to make people passionate to travel, the government has to provide a high-quality background for tourism and put part of their budget on this important task.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... aforementioned reasons are those which ones maybe understand at first glance, still...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'country travel'.
Suggestion: country travel
...ll there is one reason. While people of a country travel in their own country, they will help th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69387755102 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59553006979 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512755102041 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7683604307 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.235294118 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0588235294 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242806993707 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828425126016 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052278803985 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138943263331 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244768207494 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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