There are different opinions on the utilization of the internet in the modern world today. Some people think that modern internet technology affects a human’s life. Other people, however, argue that it is beneficial in many ways to everyone. I, myself, agree with the latter as it plays an important role in this technological world in all areas. I feel this way for three significant reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, one important reason that the usage of the internet enhances the knowledge and skills that people need most in today’s world. For instance, students utilize the internet more often to learn and know the unknown subject for their exams or assignments to solve the problems which leads to gain their comprehensive skills to find solutions. In the same way, software employees use the internet for greater awareness so that they can do their job precisely. As a consequence, the usage of the internet increases the understanding levels and capability to decode everything.
In addition, another important reason that communicating with distant relatives and friends. For instance, now-a-days people move or travel abroad for their own purposes and miss their family and friends. Due to our advanced technology, they are willing to communicate via voice call or face to face call anywhere on the network. Furthermore, many interviews and office meetings held through skype or any other video call service which uses the world wide web to discuss their opinions or ideas. As a result, the spread of networks across the globe helps out to communicate with others wherever they are.
Lastly, other than enhancing knowledge and communicating others, it helps people to buy products online. For example, people are very busy with their work and gets no time to go out for shopping. For them, online shopping websites such as Amazon, Flipkart, myntra and so on are available online and buys products like dresses, accessories, mobile accessories, electronics and so on. Even though people send gifts to family and friends through online. In the same way, people order food by their own choice by online food websites such as zomato, swiggy and etc., instead of going to distant restaurants. Consequently, online websites are very useful for them who do not want to spend their time going out.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the internet has a vast significant effect on people’s lives across the world. This is because learning online improves grasping power, share their ideas and online websites encourage people not to waste their precious time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2198.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17176470588 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73266135156 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557647058824 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5986871798 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9090909091 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3181818182 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86363636364 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146684748907 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495415258236 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544558432576 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924017565731 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538360189988 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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