Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best
teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree with the statement that parents are the best teachers. Parents are the first person or people whom a child sees when he or she first opens his or her eyes. As the child grows, it starts learning things form the nearby people. The nearby people firstly include parents. Hence, they become their first teachers. Being the first teachers, it becomes sole responsibility of the parents to teach their children in the right way. I have two reason to support the statement that parents are the best teachers. The first reason is, parents, being the first teachers, will have the greatest influence in child's behavior development and the second reason is parents behavior and mannerism inside and outside the home. I will supply the explanation to the reason stated to further support the claim.
As said, the first reason, the child will start learning from the nearby people. Parents who are very close to child in the beginning become the first people to teach their child. When the child comes to the age of five or six, they will start learning more form parents, for example, things like keeping their areas or rooms clean and tidy, or keeping their book shelf clean. Just by looking at their parents habits, the child will also automatically starts keeping its small things clean like keeping its bed clean, or its keeping its school bag clean and so on. As the child grows, they sometime become prone to get addicted to the bad habits like biting nails, teasing dogs. The parents have to take care of the children and make them to stop such habits.
The second reason which I believe that parents are the best teachers is their behavior and manners at both in and out of the house. For example, when a parent is driving on the road with the child sitting beside him or her, it is the responsible of the parent to follow the traffic rules strictly. If the parent brakes the traffic rule, for example, going on the road which is marked as "one-way", or passing the road even if the traffic light is still red, makes the child learn the same action and also take the advantage of doing the same when he or she starts driving. The children learn from parents. Hence, for this purpose, the parents should not break the rules when outside. Even in inside home, the parents should make the child learn how to respect elders. For example, if the parents do not show much respect to the elderly people, mostly, their parents, the child will also start to cultivate the same habit of not giving much respect to the parents. This too, highlights the fact that the parents are the best teachers for the children.
Thus, I would conclude the essay, by stressing the statement that the parents are the best teachers for their children because, they are the people, who are influencing more on them when the child is growing and learning the things.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, so, still, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2360.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 503.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69184890656 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24960993834 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.405566600398 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 11.0 3.08781362007 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3605252724 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9583333333 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13651968121 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559184182919 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656387360698 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882554253509 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467483291609 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 58.1214874552 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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