“Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.”
Teachers are the one who makes us learn for a living. We can't imagine our life without teachers. As we know life is a long learning process where one has to groom self. In this in-between process, a teacher is always there to enhance one's learning and act as a strong motivator to upgrade. In one's life ,they encountered so many people who teach them to move ahead. Likewise, Parents are the great teacher in one's life who is always there in good and bad circumstances. In my opinion, Parents are the best teachers. I strongly believe this statement. I feel this way for two reasons , which I am going to explore.
To begin with, always parents are there to support 27/7. There are so many teachers in one's life but none of them are there to present at any moment and come up with a necessary assist. Actually,parents always stand for their children.My own experience is a good example to demonstrate this. To be honest, it was a black day for me, a few years ago I went with my friends for a get-together party and I was drunk, I behave so silly with my friends and later on, they went by leaving me, I used to go here and there in street for help and no one helped me. Suddenly, I encountered my college teacher and seek help, to my surprise he left me alone there. After half hour my father came and took me home and very next day he thoroughly advise me how to deal every situation and since that time I am not having such kind of problem. That's why parents are always there to help anytime which ultimately long life lesson.
Furthermore, parents teach us real practical knowledge how to survive in this real digital world. From day to day experiences of a real scenario of life , they know much better knowledge.They teach us as they are teaching themselves because child love is more than other. My own experience is a good example to demonstrate this. I did excellently in academics but real practical I often lack. My father taught me each and everything that has to be accepted and has to learned which I didn't get from my academics learning. Real learning of life can get from parents rather than other well-wishers. I mean to say that parents are the great teacher as compared to others. As a result, one can able to cope up in a real environment.
To sum up, I strongly believe that parents are great teacher as they teach us in every moment and help us how to survive in real world scenario.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...os;t imagine our life without teachers. As we know life is a long learning process...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...motivator to upgrade. In one apos;s life ,they encountered so many people who teac...
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Suggestion: ,
...atement. I feel this way for two reasons , which I am going to explore. To begi...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , parents
...ome up with a necessary assist. Actually,parents always stand for their children.My own ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
...parents always stand for their children.My own experience is a good example to dem...
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Line 3, column 740, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'advises'.
Suggestion: advises
...me home and very next day he thoroughly advise me how to deal every situation and sinc...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y experiences of a real scenario of life , they know much better knowledge.They te...
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Suggestion: They
... life , they know much better knowledge.They teach us as they are teaching themselve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, if, likewise, so, well, as to, i feel, i mean, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52687198823 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479120879121 0.524837075471 91% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.296003743 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.08 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146014297307 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525215157379 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512151197638 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841941470974 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486259680497 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => OK
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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