Teachers can provide us except for education, in this degree, I basically agree with the satement that out parents are the best teachers of ours. In that parents are not only the first teachers in our life, to many people, they are the most valuabe people who we can learn from. Education is a procedure for us to recognize ourselves, undersand others and the society,with this definition of teacher, our parents make an example for us. I will address my views thereinafter.
To begin with, It is true that we can learn a lot from our parents, mostly we can learn from their personality and the inspiration which could encourage us to focus on our study. Besides, we can learn lots of significant rules of considering people and problems from trivial matters. When we were young, we were taught by them to venerate the olds as we are the yongsters. When we made faults, they taught us to admitt the mistakes. When I was in primary school, once I stole a little cash from my uncle, after shopping for food in the supermarket, my mother found me and asked where the mony from. I was not intended to confess while my mothe told me as a man, you should be honest and intergity, there is no easy way for an adult who steal others. Then I realized my fault and committ it. My mother braught me to my uncle, wiht my plushed face, I appologized to him. Years later, I still appreciated my mother's words which benefits me much.
Teachers, however, who cultivate us in the schools, are also very important, I have no doubt about this point. While the inspiration of studying in our heart, as my concern, is encrouaged by our parents. By this mean, our pearents are the loyal supports of us. After the faling of the first year's college entrance examination, I had to prepare it for anohter. While my parent encouraged me feom the beginning to the end of the second year which was a tough time for me. With their perpetural encouragement, I tried my best to passed the exam. That's also the reason why I sit here to share the story of mine, they are teachers who teach us never never never give up.
Finally, there is aother case we need to know thus the parents are the best teachers of us, the son and daughters would learn everything from them, thus if the parents do not behave theirselves to do wrong things even make crimes. Maybe, there children will be another duplication of them in the futrue. In this point, I belive the parents should be aware of every behavior of themselves. Also , a harmonius family would do lot in faovr to everybody in the family. I had some classmate whose parents were divorced, the victims were their kids in the end. I found they seldom had happy time as they were alone whenever I found them, in tears or no words. It's a tough time for kids, though they were innocent.
In all, people learned a lot which are also significant from parents, I belive they are the best eachers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , with
...selves, undersand others and the society,with this definition of teacher, our parents...
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Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... they taught us to admitt the mistakes. When I was in primary school, once I stole a...
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Line 5, column 292, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...ts of us. After the faling of the first years college entrance examination, I had to ...
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Line 5, column 544, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...nt, I tried my best to passed the exam. Thats also the reason why I sit here to share...
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Line 5, column 640, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: never
...of mine, they are teachers who teach us never never never give up. Finally, there is aot...
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Line 7, column 394, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...re of every behavior of themselves. Also , a harmonius family would do lot in faov...
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Line 7, column 655, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ver I found them, in tears or no words. Its a tough time for kids, though they were...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, then, thus, while, except for, no doubt, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 92.0 43.0788530466 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2384.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 529.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50661625709 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79583152331 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49752886057 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502835538752 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 742.5 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9061499109 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1428571429 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8928571429 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103726742841 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0277450160452 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351507544608 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0648207968853 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354755214339 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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