In the front of the paint Guernica, by Picasso, I would not comprehend this abstract masterpiece without interpretion.Someone said the art should be closer to the public, thus it will be popular among the people. Well actually this is an open topic when we discuss the understanding of arts. Whether the works of art have the merit depends on the viewers who are evaluate them. Thus the first thing is that the viewers should be aware of the art. Also, art itself is the invetion of human beings, so let's evaluate the merit of arts by different criterions.
To begin with, one should know the meaning of the art then he could make a right detemintaion. As Guernica in front of me, maybe it is worthless if I do not know the meaning from the background in 1937, Picasso painted this abstractive paint with the osteric bull head and horse head, crying mother with the dying child in her arms, which represent the fighting against Fascisism. While when everything makes sense after this introduction, I even can feel the sadness of the crying half naked mother's suffering, tears also on my face.So this is the first step when we talk about the merit of art, one should cultivate himself to adapt to the level which the art need, or the art will be strange or opaque to him.
Secondly, there are some art which could not be comprehended by people. As betoween once said," Music if the language of the God." Indeed, God's words are so dulcet that I was always attracted by them. While in another word, we can not ignore the value of the art like Music if we do not understand it. In other word, you can seldom to hear Beijing Opera out of China, which has be of history for five hundred years. It will be an alien music for foreigners who hear it for the first. However, this is the historical cultrual vestige for china, most of which written by the real historical event in China from thousands years ago to present.
In addition,the topic whether the work of art has merit should be taken objectively. There are thousands of experts who are woring on it, we can listen to their advice, and also the Internet will tell us more about the art's value. Besides this reference, it is more important to enhance ourselves. Thus the work of art which seem to be strange for us can be viewed objectively. Do not ignore and kinds of arts as well as any kinds languages, they are all telling us their existence in the world.
As I also relax myself by the slogan"Hakuna Matata" from the african tribal language in the Movie the Lion King, we should not ignore any value of the art as they are all existing in the world no matter how popular they are, the most significant is the open mind of our human being, we should be welcome to them as well as we take the attitude when we appreciate foreign languages. They are all the human beings', most of them from our predceccors' invetions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2382.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 523.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55449330784 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78217453174 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58048710132 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483747609943 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 729.9 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.0626639996 60.3974514979 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.428571429 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9047619048 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220209924513 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762468750215 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550465296909 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125297109858 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518208260298 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.