Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
By and large, it is established without a doubt that education is a pivotal issue in everyone's life of today. The role of parents as the supporter of their children through their educational life is also of great importance. When it comes to the comparison with the past, I believe that parents of today are more involved in their children's education. In what follows, I illustrate my reasons regarding this subject.
The first aspect to point out is that, these days, parents are more knowledgeable about the advantages of a good education and its influences on the future of their children's life. They know that someone who is educated has more chance of being a successful person in their future. In addition, media and published materials of today encourage parents to be more sensitive about this issue and in this way, they try to raise parents' awareness. Comparing myself with my parents at a time they were studying can illustrate a good example. I remember that, when I was at school, there were so many journals, books and TV programs that was about the educational benefits and the importance of involving parents in the educational decisions of their children. However, when my parents were kids there were no such awareness or knowledge about the impact of this issue.
There is a furthermore subtle point we must consider which is the fact that, nowadays, the number of children in families is being decreased in comparison with the past. Therefore, parents have more time to spend with their children and to be involved in their educational matters. For instance, my parents were from big families with five children. However, these days, people try to have fewer children, at most three, and instead, they want to put most of their time and energy for these few children to be more successful in their future.
Finally, yet importantly, these days, schools have an important role. They most of the time ask parents to come to their children's school and talk to them about the probable educational problems of their kids. There is also many meetings and ceremonies which parents should participate and naturally, they get involved with their children's education. For example, in my school, every month a meeting between parents and school administration was held that the presence of parents was obligatory.
In conclusion, I think the role of parents in the education of children are more potent in comparison with the past. It is because we have more parents that are knowledgeable, families are smaller and schools are more influential in this matter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 225, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun meeting seems to be countable; consider using: 'many meetings'.
Suggestion: many meetings
...l problems of their kids. There is also many meeting and ceremonies which parents should par...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2152.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99303944316 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73415146223 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440835266821 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 670.5 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4658806898 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.55 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362197063255 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140305484006 0.076458572812 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080337173583 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24642009833 0.150856017488 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428890908123 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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