Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
<span style="color: rgb(14, 16, 26); font-family: "Akkurat Std", sans-serif; font-size: 17px;"> Children's education is critically important, which means that their future would be highly secured if they finish their studies. Personally, I believe that in the past parents were involved in the education of their kids more than today. I feel that way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay. </span><br style="color: rgb(14, 16, 26); font-family: "Akkurat Std", sans-serif; font-size: 17px;"><span style="color: rgb(14, 16, 26); font-family: "Akkurat Std", sans-serif; font-size: 17px;"> To commence with, Parents these days are busy all day because they are working a full-time job. This is due to the increase in living expenses and economical crisis. In contrast, parents in the past are working a part-time job, and even some of them are working just a few days a week. My personal experience is a compelling example of what I mean. I am working a full-time job in a dental office with my wife everyday. We used to close our office at 9:00 pm and my kids went home at 5:00 pm, so we do not have time to stay with them and review their school assignments. We rely, however, on school's teachers for their educations. As you can see, parents do not have enough time to stay and educate their kids. </span><br style="color: rgb(14, 16, 26); font-family: "Akkurat Std", sans-serif; font-size: 17px;"><span style="color: rgb(14, 16, 26); font-family: "Akkurat Std", sans-serif; font-size: 17px;"> Secondly, Most of the kids today are studying in private schools in which they are teaching them in a different language. the parents are not familiar with this language. As a result of that, parents are not able to follow their kids or to help them with their studies. For instance, My nieces went to a private school in order to get a better education, but their education was all in English. When I asked my sister how are her kids doing in the school, she told me she did not know what they are doing, even she can't understand how to help them. for that reason, she hired a home teacher to teach her kids one day a week. Nonetheless, in the past, our parents were very involved in our education and help us a lot in our studies. </span><br style="color: rgb(14, 16, 26); font-family: "Akkurat Std", sans-serif; font-size: 17px;"><br style="color: rgb(14, 16, 26); font-family: "Akkurat Std", sans-serif; font-size: 17px;"><span style="color: rgb(14, 16, 26); font-family: "Akkurat Std", sans-serif; font-size: 17px;"> To sum up, for the aforementioned argument, Nowadays parents are not able to help the kids during their education period not only because they are busy all the day but also because most of the new generation kids are studying in a different language which makes it difficult for their parents to help them in their work. </span>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, even so, for instance, i feel, i mean, in contrast, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2627.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57749469214 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.88172304085 2.67179642975 145% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430997876858 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 700.2 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 154.422128938 48.9658058833 315% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.263157895 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7894736842 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151906821251 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866928250588 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941114160375 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151906821251 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 11.7677419355 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 10.9000537634 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 10.002688172 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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