Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
according to statistics in 2008 the percentage of un employee people in many counties increased dramatically in the recent decades. Is getting job an easy mission today? or it is easier in the past? everyone knows in the past the opportunity to getting secured job is easier than today. Personally, I believe the reasons for getting successful job in the past easier than now a days are:
First, less competition. In the past the number of people who can attend school is less than todays. mostly it included the wealthy people. Those people they can send their children to these schools like medicine, engineering, and political economy.Accordingly, those can have jobs with high income and in turn, it will affect their future positively. in contrast, today many people can attend these schools which increase the competition in certain fields. eventually, it is not certainly they can thrive in this carrier. My husband, Ali, is own agricultural company as his father and grandfather did. but, he cannot have a good income and subsequently a successful future because of competition in contrast to his father and grandfather in the past.
In addition,the living standard in the past is less than today. In the past, the people can live a decent life and could give all their needs easily than today. today children and teenagers never stop buying new versions of their electronics. In the past the life is simple and kids can easily persuaded to play simple non expensive games.As a result, the guardian easily could provide happy life and secure future for him and his family through simple job.As a whole, we can say even any type of job in the past can identified to have decent life.
In conclusion, I believe it is easy to know which job can secure a happy and succesful life because of less competition and simple life standard and welfare.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90158730159 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76550759354 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507936507937 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7120915025 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8235294118 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107941771237 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044789597358 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541571781328 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706620112913 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479678642615 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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