There are different opinions on whether or not today's young people have become more independent than before. Despite the fact that some people think that nowadays, the young generation relies on their parents most of the time and their decisions depend on what their parents want, I believe otherwise, maintaining that youth and adolescents in the modern era are free-standing, and they make most of their decisions by themselves. In what follows, I will delve into the most persuasive reasons to substantiate my perspective.
Without a doubt, the most consequential reason corroborating my stance on this subject is that today's children are well-educated. They have trained their ability to look at their problems and difficulties from different perspectives. Young people of the modern world will consider various aspects of the issues they face, so they do not need to rely on anyone else in their decision makings. Drawing from my own experience, many years ago, after finishing high school, I had to choose a university to continue my education, and I decided to choose a university located in another city than my hometown. I utilized what my teachers had taught me in high school and specified the advantages and disadvantages of studying and living in a new town far from my family. I made one of the most momentous decisions of my life with the help of my previous knowledge and information, not by taking assistance from my parents. Therefore, this reason clearly manifests that today's young generation makes most of their decisions by themselves.
Although the previous reason is the first one crossing the mind at first glance, another remarkable point deserving some words here is technological progress during the recent decades. Nowadays, almost all children have access to computers and the internet. They use the help of computers, the internet, and other modern devices in their decision, for example, in purchasing some stuff, rather than the help of their parents. It is not exaggerating if we say that parents today are even more dependent on their children than their children are on them. Take my father as an example. Whenever my father decides to buy a device, he asks me to surf the internet and introduce him to some of the best brands. He is more dependent on me in his decisions than I am on him. Thus, this point illustrates the fact that today, youth are more independent than ever.
All in all, many people are in favor of the idea that children and youth are rely on their parents in their decision more than they were before. Nevertheless, the foregoing points lead us to conclude that not only are modern-era children independent of their parents, but their parents depend too much on them; this is because today, children are more educated, so they can make their decisions by considering different aspects of them, and they have the help of technology in their decision makings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
There are different opinions on whether or not todays young people have become more in...
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Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relied'.
Suggestion: relied
...of the idea that children and youth are rely on their parents in their decision more...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2437.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 488.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99385245902 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80095816979 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473360655738 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 758.7 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.0722226227 48.9658058833 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.85 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303857390426 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947036471552 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929222163586 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216073801784 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694439271671 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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